Wednesday, September 12, 2007

Family of Ducks

A family of ducks is in the pond.
They’re shaking their heads and twisting their necks
They swim together in a circle of love.
Now they’re flying high above.

-Victor Eaves
Grade 4

5 comments:

Anonymous said...

Great job Victor! I am so proud of you :-)

Anonymous said...

Victor, I love your imagery and imagination. You are such a great writer.

Anonymous said...

I believe that this is the best poem on this entire blog. Way to go Victor...You are a poet and don't know it:) Thanks for sharing your beautiful work with me. Keep up the good work...I'm so proud of you!!!

Anonymous said...

Your poem is good!!!!

Anonymous said...

good but not the best.